[draft]Procedure of the Deshret Amendment III

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And i completely agree with you
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Then what's the problem? :P
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Was there a problem? I had no problem? :) Apologies if it seemed there was
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Probably wasn't, I'm just tired so I probably just misconstrued something. Time to wait unless one of the other Councilors (of which there are many even if it doesn't look like it :P ) has an issue.
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This is probably more nitpicky than necessary, but the law is actually called the Procedure of the Deshret rather than Deshret Procedures. It may be a good idea to use the actual title in your (1) clause to avoid any confusion.
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Fixed.
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Why not just:

Councilors of the Deshret may cast a vote for or against a proposal. Councilors of the Deshret may cast a vote of present indicating that one has participated in the vote for the purpose of retaining membership in the Deshret but is not in favor or against the proposal.

I think its pretty obvious when something is in favour or against and there is no need to codify the Keeper being able to choose what it means.
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^I like that idea.
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I like the idea to and have edited the OP to reflect that. Thanks Charles. :D

If nobody has any issues here I'm going to motion to vote.
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Seconded.
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