Ma'at Kheru: Repeal "Condemn The Black Riders"
Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 4:51 pm
[quote="Repeal Condemn The Black Riders, by Ramaeus]
Description: WA Security Council Resolution #91: Condemn The Black Riders shall be struck out and rendered null and void.
Argument: The Security Council,
Recognizing the laudable intentions of SC#91, but due to poor draftsmanship, falls short of a condemnation expected for a region like The Black Riders, notably,
-The numerous typographical errors in use of punctuation, excessively long sentences, lack of pronoun agreement, and more,
-The use of the word “recent” in the present tense to describe raiding actions that are now in the past,
Regretting the use of words in SC#91 that yield unintentional and nonsensical meaning, including,
-“anti-WA establishments and attitudes”,
-“Angered by The Black Riders forced removal of those nations which are natives to the regions they conquer”,
-“32 day oppressive and horrific seize that followed”,
-“leading the regions to an undeniable downfall”,
Disturbed by the blatant manipulations found in SC#91, including references to “cultural genocide”, and aware that the systematic destruction of a culture is something in which no military organization, no matter how prolific, could succeed,
Determined to field a resolution that accurately demonstrates the menace The Black Riders have since become,
Hereby repeals SC#91, “Condemn The Black Riders”.
Co-Authored by The Republic of The Black Hat Guy.
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Thoughts on this?
Description: WA Security Council Resolution #91: Condemn The Black Riders shall be struck out and rendered null and void.
Argument: The Security Council,
Recognizing the laudable intentions of SC#91, but due to poor draftsmanship, falls short of a condemnation expected for a region like The Black Riders, notably,
-The numerous typographical errors in use of punctuation, excessively long sentences, lack of pronoun agreement, and more,
-The use of the word “recent” in the present tense to describe raiding actions that are now in the past,
Regretting the use of words in SC#91 that yield unintentional and nonsensical meaning, including,
-“anti-WA establishments and attitudes”,
-“Angered by The Black Riders forced removal of those nations which are natives to the regions they conquer”,
-“32 day oppressive and horrific seize that followed”,
-“leading the regions to an undeniable downfall”,
Disturbed by the blatant manipulations found in SC#91, including references to “cultural genocide”, and aware that the systematic destruction of a culture is something in which no military organization, no matter how prolific, could succeed,
Determined to field a resolution that accurately demonstrates the menace The Black Riders have since become,
Hereby repeals SC#91, “Condemn The Black Riders”.
Co-Authored by The Republic of The Black Hat Guy.
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Thoughts on this?