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The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 5:18 pm
by Severisen Montresor
Ladies and Gentlemen of the Deshret, it is with great pleasure that I bring before you a treaty between The East Pacific and the OFO. I, along with Vizier Cormac, and The East Pacific, have been at work on this treaty for a number of weeks, and we are proud to present it here before you today.

As usual, there will be a discussion period, at which point motions to vote may be made. I can answer any questions you may have about this treaty.

I look forward to your feedback, and hopeful for your acceptance of this great document and the relationship it will build.

Without further ado, The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity
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The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity wrote:Foreword

Recognizing the potential for a great and lasting bond and affirming their belief in common understanding and respect between Feeders and Sinkers, The East Pacific and Osiris, hereafter referred to as "the signatories", agree to and declare the following treaty;

Article I - Mutual recognition
1. The signatories recognize the governments established by the Concordat of The East Pacific and the State Code of Osiris, and any legally enacted successor governments, as the legitimate governments of The East Pacific and Osiris.
2. The signatories recognize each other’s legitimate governments as sovereign entities.
3. The signatories recognize the Sekhmet Legion as the official independent military of the region of Osiris, and the Eastern Pacific Sovereign Army as the official independent military of The East Pacific for the purposes of this treaty.

Article II - Diplomatic Relations
1. The signatories guarantee continuing diplomatic relations with each other.
2. The signatories agree to open and maintain in-game and off-site forum embassies with each other.

Article III - Mutual Defense
1. The signatories agree not to invade signatory home regions nor to undertake any military action aimed at the overthrow of the signatories' legitimate governments.
2. The signatories agree to provide mutual defense to each other, when requested by either the chief executives or the most senior military officials of the signatories' legitimate governments.
3. Defense may include providing in-game World Assembly endorsements to the signatories' legitimate Delegates, Vice Delegates, and/or The East Pacific’s Viziers or Osiris’ Guardians of Atef, as applicable and whenever possible, as well as verbal declarations of support by the chief executives or the most senior foreign affairs officials of the signatories' legitimate governments.

Article IV - Military Cooperation
1. The signatories agree that they will respect the sovereign right of each signatory's official military forces to undertake any military operation that does not violate any other provision of this treaty.
2. The signatories agree in principle to military cooperation, provided that such cooperation does not violate their own laws or established executive and/or military policies and provided that the operation is deemed mutually beneficial by the relevant executive and/or military official(s) of both signatories.
3. Neither signatory is obligated to participate in any operation, excluding mutual defense operations as described above, that includes other military forces.
4. The signatories agree to recognize that the military forces of each signatory are independent forces, and may engage on opposite sides of a military operation. Such opposing operations shall not be construed as acts of hostility or aggression unless resulting in a violation of any other provision of this treaty.

Article V - Intelligence
1.The signatories agree to inform the chief executives or most senior intelligence officials of the signatories' legitimate governments of any threat to the security of the in-game regions or off-site forums of the signatories, immediately upon becoming aware of the threat.
2. The signatories agree that any shared intelligence will be kept confidential unless permission to disclose the information is explicitly granted by the chief executive of the signatory relaying the information.
3. Neither signatory will, directly or indirectly, initiate or participate in espionage against the other signatory.

Article VI - Culture
1. The signatories agree to allow the in-game and off-site promotion of the signatories' cultural events, including but not necessarily limited to role play, games, and educational activities.
2. The signatories agree to cooperate in organizing and hosting joint cultural events.

Article VII - Dissolution
1. Either signatory may withdraw from this treaty after providing notice in the embassy maintained on the other signatory's off-site forum at least seven days prior to the withdrawal.
2. The signatories agree to undertake all reasonable effort to seek diplomatic solutions to problems that may arise between the signatories before withdrawing from this treaty.

Article VIII - Officials
1. Upon ratification of this treaty, the signatories will provide a list of the various officials noted in this treaty and will promptly notify each other when new officials are elected or appointed.
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The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity wrote:Foreword

Recognizing the potential for a great and lasting bond and affirming their belief in common understanding and respect between Feeders and Sinkers, The East Pacific and Osiris, hereafter referred to as "the signatories", agree to and declare the following treaty;

Article I - Mutual recognition
1. The signatories recognize the governments established by the Concordat of The East Pacific and the State Code of Osiris, and any legally enacted successor governments, as the legitimate governments of The East Pacific and Osiris.
2. The signatories recognize each other’s legitimate governments as sovereign entities.
3. The signatories recognize the Sekhmet Legion as the official independent military of the region of Osiris, and the Eastern Pacific Sovereign Army as the official independent military of The East Pacific for the purposes of this treaty.

Article II - Diplomatic Relations
1. The signatories guarantee continuing diplomatic relations with each other.
2. The signatories agree to open and maintain in-game and off-site forum embassies with each other.

Article III - Mutual Defense
1. The signatories agree not to invade signatory home regions nor to undertake any military action aimed at the overthrow of the signatories' legitimate governments.
2. The signatories agree to provide mutual defense to each other, when requested by either the chief executives or the most senior military officials of the signatories' legitimate governments.
3. Defense may include providing in-game World Assembly endorsements to the signatories' legitimate Delegates, Vice Delegates, and/or The East Pacific’s Viziers or Osiris’ Guardians of Atef, as applicable and whenever possible, as well as verbal declarations of support by the chief executives or the most senior foreign affairs officials of the signatories' legitimate governments.

Article IV - Military Cooperation
1. The signatories agree that they will respect the sovereign right of each signatory's official military forces to undertake any military operation that does not violate any other provision of this treaty.
2. The signatories agree in principle to military cooperation, provided that such cooperation does not violate their own laws or established executive and/or military policies and provided that the operation is deemed mutually beneficial by the relevant executive and/or military official(s) of both signatories.
3. Neither signatory is obligated to participate in any operation, excluding mutual defense operations as described above, that includes other military forces.
4. The signatories agree to recognize that the military forces of each signatory are independent forces, and may engage on opposite sides of a military operation. Such opposing operations shall not be construed as acts of hostility or aggression unless resulting in a violation of any other provision of this treaty.

Article V - Intelligence
1.The signatories agree to inform the chief executives or most senior intelligence officials of the signatories' legitimate governments of any threat to the security of the in-game regions or off-site forums of the signatories, immediately upon becoming aware of the threat.
2. The signatories agree that any shared intelligence will be kept confidential unless permission to disclose the information is explicitly granted by the chief executive of the signatory relaying the information.
3. Signatories will ensure that any violators of Article V Section 2 will be held accountable to the applicable laws in their respective regions.
4. Neither signatory will, directly or indirectly, initiate or participate in espionage against the other signatory.

Article VI - Culture
1. The signatories agree to allow the in-game and off-site promotion of the signatories' cultural events, including but not necessarily limited to role play, games, and educational activities.
2. The signatories agree to cooperate in organizing and hosting joint cultural events.

Article VII - Dissolution
1. Either signatory may withdraw from this treaty after providing notice in the embassy maintained on the other signatory's off-site forum at least seven days prior to the withdrawal.
2. The signatories agree to undertake all reasonable effort to seek diplomatic solutions to problems that may arise between the signatories before withdrawing from this treaty.

Article VIII - Officials
1. Upon ratification of this treaty, the signatories will provide a list of the various officials noted in this treaty and will promptly notify each other when new officials are elected or appointed.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 5:45 pm
by Andrew
Nicely done and very strategic

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 6:16 pm
by Bob Moran
Why not, seems like Osi and TEP have worked together a lot recently.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 2:49 am
by Vaculatestar
I like this, very well done.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 3:42 am
by Charles Cerebella
A solid treaty. Having assisted them in their joint occupation of Warzone Asia with TNP they are certainly a region where there is potential for future cooperation.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 12:52 pm
by Dead Account
seems like a good idea

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 2:46 pm
by Rach
I'd support this.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 5:50 am
by Treize Dreizehn
I definitely like the idea of a treaty with TEP, just a couple of quibbles with the language here.

First of all the guarantee to maintain ingame embassies in II-2 might be a problem if the region is invaded and the delegacy taken(on either side). Dissolution of the ingame embassy, which could be outside our power to prevent shouldn't be a treaty violation. That should probably read "2. The signatories agree to open and make a good faith effort to maintain in-game and off-site forum embassies with each other."

Second, and this problem comes up in almost any treaty outlining intelligence sharing and the problems with leaks. There is nothing guaranteeing a prosecution by our laws if someone shares Intelligence from TEP with an outside source. There is some legal mumbo jumbo we could muster saying the government official responsible for authorizing the intel being distributed is the TEP source... but really it oughta be explicit in the treaty(like in the TNI treaty).

It's going to be difficult to get the language right since TEP and us probably have espionage defined differently... but even just guaranteeing that "the appropriate laws will be applied" is probably good enough.

Finally... I'm not sure I'm a fan of a 7 day notice for dissolution of a treaty. If we have cause to dissolve the treaty... it's probably an immediate thing. There's no virtue to a delay.

Anyway, that's my two cents on it. Ultimately I really hope we pass this treaty... I just want to make sure we get it right.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 1:37 pm
by Venico
Treize Dreizehn wrote:Thu May 15, 2014 10:50 amFinally... I'm not sure I'm a fan of a 7 day notice for dissolution of a treaty. If we have cause to dissolve the treaty... it's probably an immediate thing. There's no virtue to a delay.
That's my only thing. Rest looks good.

The East Pacific - Osiris Treaty of Amity

Posted: Thu May 15, 2014 2:38 pm
by Small Huts
We are pleased.