Osiris Fraternal Order

And i completely agree with you

Then what's the problem?

Was there a problem? I had no problem? Apologies if it seemed there was

Probably wasn't, I'm just tired so I probably just misconstrued something. Time to wait unless one of the other Councilors (of which there are many even if it doesn't look like it ) has an issue.

This is probably more nitpicky than necessary, but the law is actually called the Procedure of the Deshret rather than Deshret Procedures. It may be a good idea to use the actual title in your (1) clause to avoid any confusion.

Fixed.

Why not just:

Councilors of the Deshret may cast a vote for or against a proposal. Councilors of the Deshret may cast a vote of present indicating that one has participated in the vote for the purpose of retaining membership in the Deshret but is not in favor or against the proposal.

I think its pretty obvious when something is in favour or against and there is no need to codify the Keeper being able to choose what it means.

^I like that idea.

I like the idea to and have edited the OP to reflect that. Thanks Charles.

If nobody has any issues here I'm going to motion to vote.

Seconded.