Draft: Commend Astarial

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Draft: Commend Astarial

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love this
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Draft: Commend Astarial

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Blaine Zeorus Montresor wrote:Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:54 pmFix this please ;w;
Asserts that Astarial’s was a fierce campaigner against the rogue delegacy of The Dourian Embassy in Osiris, during which the region was occupied by Gatesville Inc and thousands of nations were ejected. Astarial’s work in the coup’s aftermath, from the positions of Kai Repat and Pharaoh, laid the foundation for the subsequent cultural, legislative, and political reformation of Osiris.
Fixed. Good pick up.
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Draft: Commend Astarial

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I'm opposed to this now due to the removal of the language related to Sovereign Confederation, based on defender objections.

I will also be campaigning against it if the language remains absent from the proposal at time of submission.
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Bru'uh of Osiris - Co-Founder of the Osiris Fraternal Order
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